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Kill me if you can

The sands of wistfulness
When the closebys are nebulous
The distant a figment of
The fatalist imbeciles.

The granules slip away
From my nonconformist grasp
Tearing me up as they go go
With eyes dying to cry.

Helplessness is, as helplessness was
A shrieking heart of despair
An angry mind of iconoclasm
Fast drying up as wistfully.

I will corrode, I will fade away
I will die, I will cry
I will kill myself, but not kill
The being of mine, that make me.

tikuli (not verified) wrote [November 9, 2008; 04:04 PM]:
Hi subir just found your poems .This is so deep and touches the very essence of one's being .The words make you think .Awesome .
Deepali (not verified) wrote [January 3, 2010; 11:52 AM]:

Kill me if you can. I can't describe here or in in words what this poem did to me. Beautiful, is all i'd say, here.
Also, uncannily reminds me of a piece of poetry I wrote about the engulfing feeling of 'dying'...its called 'Epitaph'. Wrote it and read it myself only once :) May share it sometime. If I dont corrode or fade away, i.e.

(Deepali/Dipz)

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